Thread:Kiyuhito/@comment-3200351-20130128154550

I paid someone to translate a part of the Akumu no Chi novel for me. Unfortunately, the translator didn't speak English very well. I read through it and I could roughly understand what was being said but some sentences are not very coherent. I know you're not very good at English either but perhaps you could help me out?

I try to improve upon the translation but I'm unable to understand what exactly is being said in some sentences. I have made a document with the improved translation. I bolded the sentences I don't understand. Could you perhaps take a look at the document, and if you can, try to explain (roughly) what the sentence meant in the Japanese version of the novel?

I understand if you don't want to help.

 